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Love at first sight gone crazy! . . . ZOMG [March 28th, 2010 at 01:13 am]
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The stories Summary "Chelsea and Doctor Tim meet each other and instantly fall in love. What will happen? Find out! Sorry for the lame title."

I had to add a category come on your flat out telling people your story lacks character development and substance off the bat.

Story Or Series Title:
Love at first sight gone crazy. Yeah Poetry ain't it?

 Author's Name:
Imaginationgirl12.
Because she's got a real imagination and  probably twelve.

Full Name (plus titles if any): Chelsea.
Just saying it makes makes Doctor, Yeah Doctor blush and admit on the spot how pretty it is.

Hair Color (include adjectives):
Brown. Yay! Lush details!

Eye Color (include adjectives):
Yay! No details!

Unusual Markings/Coloration:
 
A perminint blush whenever someone of the opposite sex complements her.

Special Possessions (if any):

A hat full of OC names she keeps throwing at the readers.

Annoying Origin: Whatever half baked Natsume plot they gave her.

Annoying Connections To Canon Characters:
Traditional Mary-Sue everyone loves her. Her character isn't developed at all but if you'd like me to go into detail about how mysterious Doctors eyes are I can.

Annoying Special Abilities:
 

Other Annoying Traits:
Other people keep telling her its time to sheer her sheep and other farm tasks she should really be keeping tabs on herself.


Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:

Tim blushed a little.
"...No problem..." He said.

Then he walked out the door.

When he left Chelsea sighed dreamily.

"Lanna...I think I like him!" Chelsea said.

Lanna giggled. <- tehe, girls can like boys~

"Yeah, that was pretty easy to see!" Lanna said.

Chelsea smiled.

"I wonder if he likes me..." Chelsea said as she started thinking. <- Aww, she can think : D

Lanna sighed.

"Probably not, he just met you!" Lanna said as she frowned.

Chelsea frowned too. <- lol she realized how silly the story is here.

"Your right...oh well." Chelsea said. <- she's gonna get him in the sack anyway

Then the two walked out the door.

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The stories not that bad. I guess.
At least its not in script forum.
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www.fanfiction.net/s/5847250/1/Love_At_First_Sight_Gone_Crazy 
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[User Picture]From: keira_magdalena
2010-03-28 05:23 am (UTC)
YAY for revival of this community! I've been meaning to post a few fanfics here, but I'm glad that another member has finally come around to posting something here. :P

As for the fanfic, well... I stopped after three lines. Why does the author make it a point to hit the Enter key after every sentence? Totally not annoying or anything like that. I'll settle for your hilarious description of the fanfic instead. :] Nice work!
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[User Picture]From: xenternameherex
2010-03-28 05:27 am (UTC)
lol I reedited it adding the summary because as soon as I read it I knew I wanted to post it here XD.
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