The stories Summary "Chelsea and Doctor Tim meet each other and instantly fall in love. What will happen? Find out! Sorry for the lame title."
I had to add a category come on your flat out telling people your story lacks character development and substance off the bat.
Story Or Series Title: Love at first sight gone crazy. Yeah Poetry ain't it?
Author's Name: Imaginationgirl12.
got a real imagination and probably twelve.
Full Name (plus titles if any): Chelsea.
Just saying it makes makes Doctor, Yeah Doctor blush and admit on the spot how pretty it is.
Hair Color (include adjectives): Brown.
Yay! Lush details!
Eye Color (include adjectives):
Yay! No details!
A perminint blush whenever someone of the opposite sex complements her.
Special Possessions (if any):
A hat full of OC names she keeps throwing at the readers.
Annoying Origin: Whatever half baked Natsume plot they gave her.
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: Traditional Mary-Sue everyone loves her. Her character isn't developed at all but if you'd like me to go into detail about how mysterious Doctors eyes are I can.
Annoying Special Abilities:
Other Annoying Traits: Other people keep telling her its time to sheer her sheep and other farm tasks she should really be keeping tabs on herself.
Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:
Tim blushed a little.
"...No problem..." He said.
Then he walked out the door.
When he left Chelsea sighed dreamily.
"Lanna...I think I like him!" Chelsea said.
Lanna giggled. <- tehe, girls can like boys~
"Yeah, that was pretty easy to see!" Lanna said.
"I wonder if he likes me..." Chelsea said as she started thinking. <- Aww, she can think : D
"Probably not, he just met you!" Lanna said as she frowned.
Chelsea frowned too. <- lol she realized how silly the story is here.
"Your right...oh well." Chelsea said. <- she's gonna get him in the sack anyway
Then the two walked out the door.
The stories not that bad. I guess.
At least its not in script forum.